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Post by HannaWestwood on Mon Jun 11, 2012 7:23 am

Title: The Adulterous Woman
Rating: 14+ (for now but I could change that to 16+)
Pairing: Luke & Inès (do not worry, the McGuy is on his way to change this Razz)

Summary: Inès has everything a girl would like to have; she's a french woman who has moved to England with her handsome husband Luke and her life is peaceful, consisting in cooking and caring about her beloved. But that's not what she wanted, and she feels like she's spoiling her youth and her dreams. Everyday is another boring day of housewife's slavery and she's ready to seize the first opportunity to change that...

Disclaimer: I do not own the McFLY, Luke Pasqualino or Inès (unfortunately).
The title and the story are inspired by the eponym short story by Albert Camus, even if it's not quite similar. It's just slightly inspired mostly concerning the wondering of the main character, Inès, about her life etc.

Authors note: I'm writing this fiction for my dear friend Inès (Brook17 on FILF) Smile

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Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8

Chapter 9
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First thoughts about the story?


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Post by ChloeRussellx on Mon Jun 11, 2012 6:05 pm

This songs really good! Very Happy
Can't wait to get reading it!
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THE ADULTEROUS WOMAN - Chapter 1

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► Chapter 1 ◄


- Babe, where are you ?
- In the kitchen ! *muttering* desperately waiting for you do give me hand for once...

Inès hadn’t choose this life. She has always wanted to live as a passionnate and independant woman. She’s always been claming that she wouldn’t mind being single for life if she wasn’t able to find the proper guy who would be compatible with her ultra feminist point of views.

But life isn’t always ending as expected, and now, Inès was living a quiet and cosy life with her husband Luke, in a little town near Oxford.
She moved to England mostly because it was her dream to do so, but it turned out that Luke needed to be transferred in Oxford. It was the perfect opportunity and they got engaged just one month before they left their tiny student flat for Paris, before taking the first flight to the London Oxford Airport.


- You look pretty upset, babe. Homesickness?
- Nope.
- Do you already miss Aix-en-Provence’s campus? He smiled, before kissing her on the cheek.

His british accent was hot. But Inès shook her head to chase this kind of thoughts. She couldn’t be that affected by homesikcness. She wasn’t from Aix, but from Marseille. She moved to Aix-en-Provence’s university to study languages when she was 18. She left her family and her friends to go there, and that’s the only thing she’d regret. Aix was full of rich sluts and daddy’s boys and girls. Well, at least, for the greater part.

- What are you cooking for dinner?
- Pasta and salad.
- Again? Oh c’mon...

“DO IT YOURSELF IF YOU DON’T LIKE IT!!! DUMBASS!” Inès was mentally fuming. Lastly, her life has turned all peaceful and she felt a little bit frustrated. She dreamed to escape from this. This wasn’t the life she’s been praying for all these years, and she didn’t like it.

Later, as Luke was taking a shower, Inès put on her nightdress and dropped onto the large bed. She kept thinking about her life and how it would have been if she had never met this hot english student in Aix. She would have certainly came back to Marseille and tried to find a job. AND, she also would have been reunited with her friends and her younger sister so they could have planned loads of exciting things and projects for the future, as they used to do before the end of their senior year.

She missed them everyday. The last time she saw their friends was for her wedding. After that, Luke and she spent the whole next month planning their departure to Oxford. It’s been 4 months now and she has sent no emails to her friends and received none from them. The reason? Internet wasn’t even set up and her phone contract wasn’t ready yet. “Silly british operator!” she thought, frowning heavily.


- Still upset? Luke said while drying his dark hair with his towel.
- Well... When do you think we’re going to have a proper internet connexion? I need to talk to the girls... I miss them.
- Ah? That’s all? You didn’t talk about them since we’re here and you’ve never reached them by phone so I think you can easily wait a few more weeks, right?

“I’m not sharing all my thoughts with you, idiot! I’M MISSING THEM AND I THINK ABOUT THEM EVERYDAY! Do you really hear me when I talk?! Dammit!”

- Alright, if you say so, she answered before diving under the covers.
- No cuddles then? Luke asked, a bit disappointed.
- Forgot my pill so, forget it.

“The last time I checked, I wasn’t supposed to marry anyone and to have a baby. I already messed up with the first thing, so I can’t think about planning the second one! That would be dreadful...”

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Post by ChloeRussellx on Tue Jun 12, 2012 7:50 pm

I've gotta get ready for work now, so I'll try read this in the staff room before I start, or when I get home later Very Happy
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Post by ChloeRussellx on Tue Jun 12, 2012 10:56 pm

uh-oh drama!!
Its horrible they had to move away from their friends Sad
Good on her for telling Luke what she thinks too! So she should!

Next chapter please? Very Happy
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THE ADULTEROUS WOMAN - Chapter 2

Post by HannaWestwood on Wed Jun 13, 2012 3:42 am

Yes, right now! Razz

Note: At the end, the french quote isn't really the same as the english one. I think it's a shortened extract as the second one (in english) seems more complete. Smile

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► Chapter 2 ◄


When Luke woke up this morning, his wife wasn’t on his side. He slowly rubbed his eyes and walked towards the kitchen. For breakfast today: burned pancakes and boiled milk. He sighed and dropped on the first chair he saw. Inès didn’t pay attention and gave him a plate full of what she called “food”.

- You know what? I’m going to find a job today!
- Really? Please, don’t say “cook” because no one’s stomach could endure this!
- Haha, funny indeed from someone who can’t cook some pasta properly! What the hell did you do of your italian’s origins? Killed it with your britishness?
- Ew that was quite discriminating...
- Then, stop calling me “Mon petit croissant” in front of your parents!
- Alright, alright, he said laughing, then, what kind of job would you like? Because we can both live properly with my scholarship.
- I know that but I wanna do some stuffs on my own...You know, to find a reason to wake up every morning which wouldn’t be related with washing or cooking!
- As you want... don’t forget to come back before dinner!

He barely had the time to finish his pancakes that Inès was kissing him on the cheek, holding her handbag and her navy blue jacket. She quickly waved and threw a little “Love ya!” before closing the door.
Once outside, Inès tied her white scarf around her neck and walked towards the first bus stop. She was intensively complaining in the inside about the fact there were no undergrounds in this city, and that the bus was taking all its time to come. After 10 minutes, no signs from one of those green buses, and after 15 minutes, she was cursing all the Oxford Bus Company. Finally, she decided to stop waiting and walked to the city center.

When she got there, she was happy to feel a great atmosphere in the streets. October was almost finished and winter was slowly coming, but people didn’t seem too bleak. Inès began to look for the first JobCentre on her way. She found one of them, let her CV for a few applies and, according to the employee, she had to wait at least one day before the first answer.
Then, she stopped in a mall to decompress. While she was checking H&M’s new collection, the shop radio announced an exclusive song from some boys band. McFly... She’s already heard that before... But where?


- Eww this sounds awful... Electronical and commercial stuff. Nay, too bad. Let’s get out of here. She thought.

Although, the chorus stayed stuck in her head whilst she was searching for a new phone. She was going to get rid of her old Blackberry to get the new one. The change between her contract in France and the one in England took too much time so she canceleld it and decided to get a proper phone with a british card. She spend some time wandering in the streets when she bumped into a group of hysterical girls who were staring at a poster in front of the Oxford New Theatre. One of the girls excused herself – which litteraly astonished Inès who wasn’t expecting such a courtesy from someone who was fangirling over some boys band poster.

- Wait, a boys band? Again? The late 90’s didn’t kill them all?! Inès sarcastically stated out loud.

The girl who has apologised glared at her, like offended, and the other ones stopped jumping wildly and glanced at her with their best killer looks.

- McFly is NOT a stupid boys band! They’re SO MUCH MORE than that! But you’re certainly WAY too old to get it!
- Me?! OLD?! You little b...!

The girls ran away before Inès could finish her sentence. She was fuming but calmed down when she realised that it was the band she listened to earlier in the mall.

“Pff they seem pretty lame anyway. But I have to admit they’re quite good looking... Baah, nowadays, with Photoshop and stuffs, you can’t really trust a poster, right?
Wait... “Nowadays”? Oh dear, I’m really talking like an old lady! I can’t believe they called me “old”... Do I look THAT outdated?”
She sighed a last time after checking her face in her compact mirror. She was just 25... She was still young, right?
“Oh no. I’m not young anymore. I’m out of my teenage years! How and when did that happened?!”

She struggled not to collapse on the ground. She felt desperate and wanted to go back to her highschool years but she perfectly knew it wasn’t possible. She suddenly thought about her Philosophy lessons during her senior year. One day, their teacher told them about a short story by Albert Camus entitled “The Adulterous Woman”. She couldn’t recall all the details but she remembered that the woman doesn’t properly cheat on her husband. One day, she leaves to the Algerian desert with him. One night, she‘s standing in front of the desert’s immensity, which is embodying the set of the possibilities that fadded away from her through the years. She realizes how much she wasted her numerous opportunies to live her life differently and feels awfully sad and desperate.



« Là-bas, plus au sud encore, à cet endroit où le ciel et la terre se rejoignaient dans une ligne pure, là-bas, lui semblait-il soudain, quelque chose l’attendait qu’elle avait ignoré jusqu’à ce jour et qui pourtant n’avait cessé de lui manquer.
Il lui sembla que le cours du monde venait alors de s’arrêter et que personne, à partir de cet instant, ne vieillirait plus ni ne mourrait. En tous lieux, désormais, la vie était suspendue, sauf dans son cœur où, au même moment, quelqu’un pleurait de peine et d’émerveillement. »


« Over yonder, still farther south, at that point where sky and earth met in a pure line - over yonder it suddenly seemed there was awaiting her something of which, though it had always been lacking, she had never been aware until now. In the advancing afternoon the light relaxed and softened; it was passing from the crystalline to the liquid. Simultaneously, in the heart of a woman brought there by pure chance a knot tightened by the years, habit, and boredom was slowly loosening. [...] Janine did not know why this thought filled her with such a sweet, vast melancholy that it closed her eyes. She knew that this kingdom had been eternally promised her and yet that it would never be hers, never again, except in this fleeting moment perhaps when she opened her eyes again on the suddenly motionless sky and on its waves of steady light, while the voices rising from the Arab town suddenly fell silent. It seemed to her that the world's course had just stopped and that, from that moment on, no one would ever age any more or die. Everywhere, henceforth, life was suspended - except in her heart, where, at the same moment, someone was weepingwith affliction and wonder. »

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Post by ChloeRussellx on Wed Jun 13, 2012 5:25 pm

Surprised
McFly are perfection! Nothing less!
But of course she'll learn this soon enough Wink

Great chapter Very Happy
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THE ADULTEROUS WOMAN - Chapter 3

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► Chapter 3 ◄


After dinner, Inès decided to lay on the couch, listening to some music, while waiting for the bathroom to be free for her. She tried every single song she had, but she couldn’t get that chorus she heard in the afternoon out of her mind. She stopped her MP3, took her earphones off and threw it all to the opposite side of the couch. When Luke appeared half naked in front of her, she had to severly bite her lips not to succumb.
“And so what? Why am I so affraid to do that? I did it more than once with him and we’re fucking married!”

Inès jumped towards him, kissing him in the neck. Luke cupped her face in his hands and kissed her with all his love. They both fell on bed, without even closing the door.

“I can have him anytime I want, I love him, he loves me. Why would I need something else?”

At 7 in the morning, Inès woke up because of an unknown ringtone. She threw one arm on right and noticed her husband was already gone to the Univeristy. After one, then two more calls, she realized it was her phone ringing; she just didn’t charged her own melodies in the phone memory yet. She sharply got rid of the covers and reached her new Blackberry on the bedside table. She missed the pending call because of the panic and widened her eyes as soon as she remembered she was still waiting for some news from the JobCentre. She held her head in her hands for a few seconds, before recovering from despair while searching for the missed calls list. She finally cleared her voice to sound less sleepy while she tried to reach the number of the expected job agency. A familiar voice answered.


- Inèèèèèèèèèèèèèèèèèèès!!!
- Hum... That’s definitely not the a JobCentre employee.
- Hee? What are you talking about? You forgot me? The girl then began to speak French. So, you live happily ever after with your husband and you don’t call, don’t text, don’t email us? What kind of friend are you, uh?
- Tara!!! I’m so glad to hear your voice! How are the girls?
- Glad to hear you too! Oh and the girls are fine but they would feel a lot better if they had some news from you...You didn’t answer my wonderings though! Where are you? Lost in the countryside or stuck on the Channel Islands with no communication ways?
- Er...no, I’m living in a proper city near Oxford. But Internet isn’t set up yet and my phone was too long to get use to the british network so I’ve bought a new one yesterday. By the way, how did you get my number?

She heard another familiar voice just behind Tara’s:

- Tell her we found it on some porn site so it would freak her out! I better hope this guy isn’t taking advantage on her because of their lack of money... Oh dear; are you well fed, B?!!!

The other girl has screamed her last sentence through the phone and left Inès with no doubt about her identity.
- Manon?! Can’t believe you’re here too! Always twisted in your thoughts, uh? Why don’t you leave me alone and go back to your naughty games with your geeky boyfriend?
- Because he left me for some biggest pair of boobies...she has a little and cute nose too... Eww...
Inès understood that Manon has properly taken the phone, against Tara’s objections. Before she began to cry – as expected – Inès shouted:
- Oï!!! Stop whimpering! Is this how I raised ya? Not at all, right? Ah, that’s my girl!

Although, Tara took her phone back and asked Inès if she was able to receive them for a few days. She replied she and Luke had a guests room and that they were all welcomed. The venue was planned for the next holidays, just before Halloween. When she inquired about the motive of their visit, Tara explained that, lastly, her own sister – Farra – and Manon discovered some awesome british pop-rock bands, and that one of them had a show scheduled in Oxford at the end of October.

- Then I’m just going to serve you as a fangirl hotel, uh?
- Oh no, don’t worry; I’m still faithfull to you – and to my dear Chris Brown *she had a tinkle laugh* I’m not even close to like the brit’pop things anyway! USA music stays the best for me, sorry!

Inès sighed as she heard Manon shouting at Tara about what she said. They both began to argue, making Inès wonder if she had to hang up her phone. She was pretty sure her friends wouldn’t notice, too busy in having one more “USA vs UK” fight. She kept waiting anyway, before asking if her sister was around.

- I don’t know where Farra’s gone... She invited us but she left half an hour ago... I’ll tell her to call you when she’s back!

She thanked her friend and said goodbye before hanging up the phone. Farra must have felt really lonely since she was gone. She was one year younger but didn’t move out from their parents’. Their younger brother was still in the house but she felt like it wasn’t enough. They both truly loved him but the two sisters were just like twins; they’ve always had a special connection. She thought about her coming and that filled her day with joy and excitement. Moreover, the JobCentre called before midday ; she was accepted in some bookstore, 10 minutes aways from the city center. Plus, Luke bought her a bouquet of red roses on his way home with “no particular reason” to explain the gesture – even if she supspected a certain desire to repeat last night’s exploits. This day definitely couldn’t have been better for her!

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Post by ChloeRussellx on Thu Jun 28, 2012 6:06 am

Hmmm, roses for no reason?
He's done somethink seriously bad!
Interrogate him!!!

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THE ADULTEROUS WOMAN - Chapter 4

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► Chapter 4 ◄


A few weeks later, Tara, Farra and Manon were chilling in the train on their way to see Inès...

- ...and secondarily, Luke. Manon added.
- I’d like to underline your “secondarily”. This perfectly shows how bitter and snide you’ve become.
- She’s always been like that, Tara.
- Back off about my lengendary temper, bitches!

After a few minutes, they arrived in one of Paris’ railway station, took the Eurostar and arrived in London two hours later. Inès was waiting for them on the platform. They all shouted and hugged each others, before calming down and moving towards the parking.

- Luke drove me here and I have to call him when we’re ready, so he will be able to pick us up!
- You sound dependant...
- And you sound quite mean, Manon. Remember who’s the old lady here? Tara pointed out. Manon was 25, but was just three months older than her.
- And who’s the married one?! Manon retorted.
- And who’s the 25-but-still-virgin here?
Manon glared at Farra as she was smiling for her victory. As usual, these two liked to tease themselves. One by one, they all asked about how Inès was doing here, if it wasn’t too difficult to understand people and if the food wasn’t too terrible. She complained about that last thing and saw Manon smile. She hesitated before going on in her detailed explanation on her new british way of life; she knew it was her friend's dream too but that she wasn’t able to do it alone. They’ve been planning to go there together, sharing a flat when they’d be fully graduated and living a kind of “Legendary” life – in Barney Stinson style. But that never happened ; Inès got engaged with Luke right after her studies and left with him. She knew it discouraged Manon a lot because she didn’t want to bother Inès and Luke's couple life once in England and was too affraid to settle down here on her own. Plus, her former boyfriend completely sucked in English...
She got out of her thoughts and caught up the conversation the girl were having:


- And what a silly name, McFly!
- Shut up! Your “Crisp Brownie” doesn’t sound better!
- HOW THE HELL DID YOU CALL HIM?! Tara shouted.

“Here we go again... Old time style. I love it.” Brook thought. A huge smile was illuminating her face. But then, it fadded away.

- Wait... What’s McFly?
- You don’t know them? They’re huge in the UK!
- I’ve heard of them a few days ago but I didn’t know it was “huge”...
- It’s the band we’re going to see on the 31st of October! And we took a ticket for you! Because you’re definetely going to love them!!!
- Oh no, Farra, are you kiding me? I’m not really up to this... Boys band always get too much hysterical fans in their crowd so this is going to be kinda annoying as I’m not even one of their fans...

Right after saying this, she got the same reaction as she got from the group of fangirls in front of the Oxford theatre. She sighed but listened to her friends carefully. She found out that Farra and Manon were McFly fans for a few months and already knew their songs by heart As they began to sing out loud, Luke arrived. He said hello and loaded the suitcases in the car. During the trip to Oxford, Farra asked if she could put a CD instead of the radio and chose an album called Radio:ACTIVE.
- Cool name.
- Listen carefully and you’ll see it’s not just about the name!!!
Her sister and her friend sung together on the first song called Lies – which was apparently Manon’s favourite. Tara was kinda suffering, but hopefully, Luke made them shut.
The trip to Inès and Luke’s flat remained silent – kind of – when the girls weren’t admiring the landscape surrounding them out loud.

The first days were quite peaceful even if the girls asked Inès a few times to make them discover the neighbourhood when her schedule allowed her to do so. Otherwise, Farra, Tara and Manon spent most of their time in Oxford’s city center on their own.

But when the last couple of days before McFLY’s gig arrived, a huge wave of excitement filled every parcel of the appartement’s atmosphere. Which was quite hard to handle for Luke. He discreetly complained about that some times to Inès, but she didn’t notice or just ignored it. She was too overwhelmed by her best friends’ presence and way too careful not to spoil this effervescency she’s been missing for months.

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Post by ChloeRussellx on Mon Jul 09, 2012 5:32 pm

Yaay they're gonna see McFly! (Jealous!)
She'll fall in love with them as soon as she hears them live!

Loved this chapter
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THE ADULTEROUS WOMAN - Chapter 5

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► Chapter 5 ◄


Eventually, the night of the gig arrived. Luke let the girls in front of the Oxford New Theatre, gave a quick kiss to his wife, and quickly get back home.

- Oh My Fucking God; ALL THESE PEOPLE?!
- We told ya to be ready earlier! You didn’t listen! Manon claimed.
- I’m warning you, big sis’; if we don’t manage to get our front row seats, DON’T EVEN DARE LOOKING AT ME AGAIN!
- Wooo; calm down Farra! That’s okay, just breathe, no stress, and let’s stand in line!

They waited for one hour till it opened, and one extra hour till they were able to get in the building. Farra and Manon were frenzied like hell, while Tara was looking for their seats.

- Oh dear, this is really front row...Tara sighed.
- OH DEAR, THIS IS REALLY THE FRICKING FRONT ROW! Farra and Manon screamed.

They managed to reach their places, breaking through the huge crowd of hysterical fans. However, our two hysterical french fan didn’t stay still for long, swiftly moving their heads, as if they were trying to look everywhere at the same time.

Suddenly, the light switched off, and the introduction music began...



<< I’ve got nowhere left to run, I’ve got nowhere left to hide.

If you leave me, if you leave me I would die... >>


As soon as the two first members appeared on stage, fully lightened, fans were screaming and shouting their names from all sides of the crowd.

“Pretty cool to get to know them finally” Inès thought, even if her friends introduced her to the band before with a kind of “special McFLY class” when they spoke for 2 hours about their music, their life, their debuts... Inès has been caught up by all the “amazing simplicity” of their lives which had been underlined by Farra and Manon’s speeches. Unfortunately, her physical opinion had been limited to the pictures of them they had on their phones (Internet wasn’t fixed yet). However, she thought it was all fake, like an image for the media.

But as soon as she saw Tom singing on stage, she realized she was wrong. Then, Danny’s voice rocked her world. The song – Nowhere left to run – was quite repetitive... but that’s why it was easy to sing along for her, as she didn’t know any lyrics.

Finally, she heard Manon’s scream; the drummer and the bass player were finally noticeable in the darkness. The boys played all the setlist, then the encore, but Inès felt like it wasn’t good enough. She was literally falling in love with this band, just in one night.


At the end of the gig, she was lost in her thoughts. How could she forget this night? How could she live without this band now? The lyrics, their live performance, their kindness, their talent... They had everything! So how the hell did she go through their huge reputation while she was living in the UK? That was madness! The girls’ gig appreciation took her back to reality.




- Harry was sooo amazing tonight... Awww ♥
- Harry?
- Harry Judd. The drummer!
- Uh? They had a drummer tonight? I thought it was recorded. Inès joked.
- Whaaaat? Why is everyone always forgetting about Harry?! Buuuh...
- Because he’s not as noticeable as the others? I mean, he’s just seated behind the drums. Tara stated.
- Ahhh, now you say it... I think I saw something moving in the dark! Inès said.
- As if! Didn’t you see the wonderful blaze of his sparkling blue eyes?!
- Er...No. No sparkles. Even seated on the front row, I just saw a part of his face and his arms...Great arms by the way!
- Let me show you some naked pic and you’d rather say “Nice bum”!
- Manon! You naughty devilish girl!
- But I stay on my position: This Harry’d better be good looking because anyway, drummers are kinda useless... Inès added.
- He’s the FUCKING drummer! Manon shouted.
- Then he’s FUCKING useless! Inès teased her.
- No, he’s a “FUCKING IDIOT”! Farra yelled, making the quotation mark with her fingers.

This line made them both laugh so hard that it wasn’t easy for Tara and Inès not to follow...even if they’d need extra explanations later.


- Okay so, in general – not to mention the Judd’s case – I have to admit they seem cool...
- Oh, I loved it when Danny yelled: “Happy Halloween guys! Wow, we have some spooky things tonight!”
- Haha, yeah, and then Dougie – the cutie on Danny’s left, right? – added: “Show me some spooky boobs!”.
- Haha seriously, who would do that?
- I’m pretty sure the girl next to me did... Tara stated, still slighty shocked.
- Haaahaa! Anyway, that was hilarious! They’re both so cute and naughty!
- Yeah. Oh, by the way, Danny and Dougie are MINE so, hands off, sister!


They laughed and as Inès was dialling Luke’s number, Farra patted on her shoulder, asking if they could go to a random pub to spend the rest of the night instead of going home. It was only 11pm. They headed to the nearest one but there were too much “McFans” who got the same idea after the gig. They had to take the bus and, after two stops, they came in a pub called “The Magnificent Seven”. Punk rock music was playing and the girls had to stand next to the counter with a bunch of Mohawks, before ordering their drinks. Inès, Tara and Farra were madly nervous, and even Manon – who was a fervent admirator of the punk culture – wasn’t really feeling comfortable.

An hour later, the girls were having fun but were interrupted by some angry calls; when Inès finally picked up her phone, she realized it was Luke and he was pretty pissed off. She checked her missed calls; approximately 20. She went to the bathroom so she could hear him better. He was ordering her to go home.

“WHAT?! For God’s sake, I can’t believe it! Is it really what you’re asking for? Sorry, but I think I can go out with my friends for once! So please, go back home and stop looking for me! I’m sick of it! I’m here in a pub, I’m having fun with my best friends so why are you asking me to go home? I don’t say anything when you stay up with your mates till 6 am and when you come home totally drunk and don’t remember anything! You could have cheated on me, I wouldn’t even be aware of it! But I still taking upon myself so, why don’t you do the same about me ?!”

She argued for almost half an hour and finished by hanging up the phone. She’s never felt so upset. Luke was literally yelling at her cause she wasn’t acting the way he wanted! He loved her, but wanted to keep everything under control. Inès loved him, but gave too much importance to her freedom. Their mutual desires weren’t compatibles.


For the first time in years, she collapsed and burst in tears.

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